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Saturday, March 5, 2022

Thinking Activity

Bridge Course: War Poetry  

This thinking Activity given by our Professor veidehi Ma'am. Here i discuss about the what is war poetry.
      

1) What is your understanding of war poetry?  

Reminding us of William Wordsworth's (1770-1850) dictum that "poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings", Jon Stallworthy (1935-2014) asserted that..

there can be no area of human experience that has generated a wider range of powerful feelings than war: hope and fear; exhilaration; hatred – not only for the enemy, but also for generals, politicians, and war-profiteers; love – for fellow soldiers, for women and children left behind, for country (often) and cause (occasionally). 

During the Great War, poetry had a currency that it lacks in the early twenty-first century. Newspapers, magazines, pamphlets, anthologies, and individual collections featured poems by combatants and non-combatants, by men and by women, at "home" or near the front lines. Poetry seemed a natural outlet for the intense emotions generated by the war and its range challenges the concept that only those with direct experience of fighting, i.e. soldiers, were allowed to write about war. The Great War was a total war and no one was left untouched by it. Suffering, mourning, patriotism, pity, and love were universally, if not equally, experienced. Thus "war poetry" is as all-encompassing as total war itself. 

War poetry is a literary genre that developed during the period of the world wars. The term was coined by Randall Jarrell in his essay “The Literature of War” (1961). Jarrell defines war poetry as “a poem that has as its theme war and that is written during or about a war. List of War Poets in English Literature- It’s important to study War poetry because it gives us insight into the actual scenario of war during World War I and II. Most of the poets of that time considered themselves as soldiers as well as poets. They used to write poets in their leisure time and express their emotions through writings.
 
What is a War Poet? 
     

A War poet is a poet who participates in a war and writes about their experiences or non-combatants who writes poems about war. These war poets are also called trench poets.

The term war poetry chiefly denotes the poetry written under the direct impact of World War I. It is also called anti-romantic. Earlier also we had war poets but after World War I these kinds of poet and poetry comes under the genre called ‘War Poetry‘.   

List of War poet's
  • Rupert Brooke
  • Siegfried Sassoon
  • Wilfred Owen
  • Robert Graves
  • Edward Thomas
  • Isaac Rosenberg.  

The theme of War Poetry:
  • The loss of innocence
  • Brotherhood and Relationship
  • The Horror of war
  • Disillusionment with religion
  • Nature
  • Irrationality of war
  • Emotional and feelings 

2.) Note down the difference of all the War Poets.

Ans, 

Wilfred Owen: Owens poems talk about the truth of war. The poems focus on the fear of war, horror, sacrifice, glory and questioning life’s purpose. 

Rupert Brooke: Brooke poems talk about the Love, Death and Immortality. 

Wilfred Wilson Gibson: As a published poet, however, Gibson was driven to imagine and represent the realities of ordinary British soldiers.Adopting the voices of both soldiers and civilians, the poems explore themes of guilt, madness, injury, death, and sense of identity. 
 
Siegfried Sassoon: Siegfried Sassoon is one of the most famous of all the war poets. He was a soldier in WWI and his poem is based on his own experience in the war. 

Ivor Gurney: Ivor Gurney was one of the most famous english poets. Gurney is known both as a poet and composer. he often contrasted the horrors of the front line with the beauty and tranquillity of his native English landscape - these themes were explored in the 2012 musical play A Soldier and a Maker. 

3.) Compare any two poems with reference to the subject, style of writing and patriotism.

Ans,  

1.) The Soldier - RUPERT BROOKE
     

The poem "The Soldier" is one of English poet Rupert Brooke's (1887–1915) most evocative and poignant poems—and an example of the dangers of romanticizing World War I, comforting the survivors but downplaying the grim reality. Written in 1914, the lines are still used in military memorials today. 

Subject of Poem:

You've most likely heard the phrase 'Home is where the heart is.' But you've probably never heard someone express the sentiment quite as literally as Brooke did in 'The Soldier.' In his sonnet, the poet ties his entire being, physical and mental, to England, making the two practically inseparable even in death. 

If I should die, think only this of me:
      That there’s some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England. There shall be
      In that rich earth a richer dust concealed; 

The first line of the poem lays down its opening gambit, implying that people need not grieve the speaker's death for reasons that are about to follow.This poem is deeply patriotic about England—and it's this patriotism that is behind the speaker's logic. He asserts that, when he dies in a far off "foreign field," his fallen body will in turn make wherever he dies a part of England too.Referring to his corpse as being “richer dust” is an interesting choice of words here and perhaps a reference to the phrase used during a funeral service. The classic “ashes to ashes, dust to dust” line. This idea that his body is simply made of dust isn’t necessarily totally symbolic. After all, we are primarily a carbon-based life form! 

A dust whom England bore, shaped, made aware,
Gave, once, her flowers to love, her ways to roam,
A body of England’s, breathing English air,
Washed by the rivers, blest by the suns of home. 

The dust metaphor continues into the fifth line where the poet talks about how that dust was formed and shaped by England. The concept that he is trying to put across is that he is the very embodiment of England, of course, the wider suggestion is that any soldier who dies for their country fulfills that same criterion. That soldiers are “shaped” by England and so when they die overseas they act almost like a seed, spreading Englishness.

The final three lines of the Octave are full of patriotic notions. They really create an image of England that is fantastic. This is done with the evocation of the natural world. Talking of flowers, the air, and rivers, these all help to create the image of England being a beautiful place. Through doing that the narrator is able to infer that a soldier can help to take the very fragments that helped to create that beauty and transport it to a foreign country. This act, if it were real, would of course be very noble 

And think, this heart, all evil shed away,
A pulse in the eternal mind, no less
Gives somewhere back the thoughts by England given; 

The use of language in this stanza is really interesting. It talks of hearts and minds in an attempt to personify England. The reason for doing this is because people have a vested interest in people. If you can humanize a country you can increase its value in the eyes of people.Whilst not referencing England directly its use is very deliberate, it puts the thought of eternity into your mind so you associate that with England. This poem has a sense that England will prevail, that our sovereignty is eternal. 

Her sights and sounds; dreams happy as her day;
And laughter, learnt of friends; and gentleness,
In hearts at peace, under an English heaven. 

The final line is very clever. It uses really positive language in order to infer that dying in the field of battle ends up with you being at peace. It results in you ending up in heaven. Not just any heaven though, an English heaven.

Style of Writing:

The Soldier is similar to a Petrarchan sonnet (or Italian Sonnet if you prefer.) This means it has 14 lines which are separated into stanzas. The rhyming pattern for this is not typical of a Petrarchan sonnet, which usually has a ABBAABBA CDECDE pattern. 

Patriotism:

Brooke’s The Soldier is the first of the sonnets to achieve fame, is still probably the most famous of the group, a poem that has become one of the standard pieces of patriotic rhetoric in English literature. “If I should die, think only this of me,” it begins; the speaker will die, it is to be understood, and the poem goes on to describe what will become of this soldier after his death. 

The body of the soldier, whom “England bore, shaped, made-aware,” becomes dust, an English dust, enriching the foreign dust in which it is buried, so that “there’s some corner of a foreign field/That is for ever England.” The poem is Platonic rather than Christian, for the soldier’s body does not await resurrection but becomes “A pulse in the eternal mind” that “Gives somewhere back the thoughts by England given.” The death imagined in the first stanza occurs in the last stanza. 

We are presented with a cleansed soul, “this heart, all evil shed away,/a pulse in the eternal mind.” The life of the soldier has been distilled to a life of goodness, and that life is owed to England. In the end, “The Soldier” celebrates the idea of self-sacrifice: according to the dead soldier, it is an honor to die for one’s country, and no thought should be given to personal desire, because the desire of the soldier and the desire of the country should be one.

2.) The Hero - Siegfried Sassoon 


   Siegfried Sassoon, born in 1886, was in service on the first day of the First World War. Although his initial poetry revealed a lot of Romantic influences, the experiences in the trenches got to him and, similarly to Owen, introduced a new sense of realism into his poetry. Sassoon himself was marked for rather reckless yet heroic actions, such as capturing a German trench in the Hindeburg-line singlehanded. But rather than report this victory, he sat down and read poetry before returning to his own camp. These kind of actions garnered him respect among his fellow soldiers, but betrayed an almost suicidal intent on advancement. 

Subject of Poem:

In the poem 'Hero', Sassoon shows the reader a mother receiving the news of her son's death from one of his comrades. The very first sentence, 'Jack fell as he'd have wished' reveals a delusion on not only the mother's side but also on society's. No one wishes to die violently, especially not in a war, and believing that they do makes parents send their children off blindly. By capitalizing 'Mother', Sassoon makes her not only the soldier's mother but also makes her a personification of Britain and its soldiers her children. Therefore it is Britain that says this sentence and deludes itself about its children. By folding up the letter sent to her, she resigns herself to the lie she has been fed, saying 'the Colonel writes so nicely'. By wrapping up a horrible truth in nice words, the Colonel manages to lull the mother into a false sense of comfort. However, the mother has a 'tired voice', as if everything up to that point has only been a long struggle, the inevitable end of which almost brings a kind of relief to her for which she feels guilty. Her voice becomes a 'choke; because in accepting the version of her son's death she has received, she prevents herself from speaking out. 

She half looked up. "We mothers are so proud of our dead soldiers." Then her face was bowed.'  

As the above two lines show, the poem is written in rhyming couplets which is very effective in bringing across moral lessons quickly. The mother's statement about her feelings leads to her 'bowed' head, to her taking a submissive pose as if she has been defeated. The archetypal picture of a mother defending her children is here undermined and leads to her subsuming herself with all the other mothers. Not only do the soldiers become faceless pawns in a game. This style also possibly mimics the loud headlines on newspapers, shouting propaganda at the reader, trying to convince them of a justification of the War. Sassoon was a big critic of the way propaganda was falsely influencing the people, and the rest of the poem serves to underline the falseness behind official communication. 

The third stanza is written from the soldier's point of view, thinking of 'Jack'. By putting the name between quotation marks, Sassoon de-personifies him and makes him a stocktype for all soldiers. On the other hand, he himself was known as 'Mad Jack' for his reckless actions and the description of 'cold-footed, useless swine' may therefore reflect on himself as well. All of them were terrified and unaware of what they were supposed to do, which led to the 'panicked' running and neglecting the 'mine' that had 'blown [him] to small bits'. The supposed message he has given to the Mother, is clearly different from the stark reality which is given to the reader in these lines. Not only did Jack try to injure himself in order to be 'sent home', he had died alone and miserable rather than a hero's death, admired by all. 'no one seemed to care' for the boys dying every single day. As a final rhyming couplet, this is extremely strong.

'And no one seemed to care,Except that lonely woman with white hair.'

It is very similar to the propaganda shouts, calling for men to stand up to defend their mothers, sisters and wives. The reality that is never explained is the mourning for these women, who are left behind alone, since all the men are off to war, and ageing with sorrow. Sassoon is considered one of the great War Poets because of the reality of the War he reveals in his poetry. Similarly to Owen, a close friend of his, he reveals the disconnect between the truth in the trenches and the truth at home. His poem leaves it perfectly in the middle where the blame could possibly lie. Both the soldier and the Colonel are lying, but so are the newspapers, both slowly making it impossible for the other to reveal the truth. 

Style of Writings: 

Written in iambic pentameter, ‘The Hero’ comprises three stanzas of six lines length largely made up of rhyming couplets, save the first four lines of the second stanza, which have an alternating rhyme scheme. Rhyming couplets, of course, are particularly effective in relaying neat epigrams or moral statements. The simplicity of the rhyme scheme perhaps apes the newspaper poetry of the time, which often went in for sentimental attitudes about the heroism of the British ‘boys’ and their sacrifice.  

Patriotism:

"I believe that the war is being deliberately prolonged by those who have the power to end it." — Siegfried Sassoon

I have seen and endured the sufferings of the troops and I can no longer be a party to prolong these sufferings for ends which I believe to be evil and unjust. I am not protesting against the conduct of the war, but against the political errors and insincerities for which the fighting men are being sacrificed.
 
“We mothers are so proud / Of our dead soldiers.’ Then her face bowed.”: The mother speaks as if for all British soldiers: perhaps the consolation that she finds in doing so is in subsuming herself in the collective loss of all the mothers of the nation. At any rate, these words do seem more sentimental than authentic: their clichéd expression helping to repress, perhaps, the great grief of the woman.

“…and how, at last, he died, / Blown to small bits.”: the grisly contrast of the soldier’s death to the heroism supposed in the poem’s title is clear. ‘Jack’ is “blown to bits” by a shell or a mine: the plosive sound, ‘b’ echoing the sound of the explosive and its effect on the unfortunate soldier. The halting rhythm of the line, with pauses following each stressed word (“how”, “last”, “died”), lends a sense of inevitability to Jack’s end.  this lines we seens some patriotism elements. 

 Both poem are similar in his poem theme and his whole concept of poetry. 

4.) Do you find any such regional poem/movies/web series/songs which can be compared to any one of the poems given here. Also, give a proper explanation of the similarity. 

Here I compare with Bollywood song नैना अश्क़ ना हो with Rupert Brookes poem  The Soldier.

नैना अश्क़ ना हो 

Naina Ashq Na Ho lyrics in Hindi & English from ‘Holiday – A Soldier Is Never Off Duty’, featuring Akshay Kumar and Sonakshi Sinha in lead roles. Directed by A R Murugadoss, the music has been composed by Pritam Chakraborty. The lyrics of Ashq Na Ho has been penned by Irshad Kamil. The song has been sung Arijit Singh.


    यूँ ना लम्हा लम्हा मेरी याद में
होके तन्हा तन्हा मेरे बाद में
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
माना कल से होंगे हम दूर
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो

नैना लौटा आने वाले साल जो
मेरी वर्दी बोले मेरा हाल तो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
ये समझना, मैं हूँ मजबूर
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो 

बीते हुए लम्हों के तारे गिनूंगा मैं
आके तुझे ख़्वाबों में तेरे मिलूंगा मैं
जब कभी हल्की हल्की बरखा आए
जब कभी दिल भी यूँही भर से जाए
जब कभी हल्की हल्की बरखा आए
उस पल झोंका इक बनके आऊंगा मैं
उस पल ज़ुल्फ़ें पलकें दामन
छू जाऊँगा मैं
ओ तेरी चूड़ी नग्में गए जो मेरे
तेरी पलकों पे हो साए जो मेरे
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
आंसू करते हमें कमज़ोर
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
 
तेरे लिए सांसें आए
तेरी लिए जाए, जाए रे… जाए रे
तेरे लिए सांसें आए
तेरी लिए जाए, जाए रे… जाए रे
रब्बा…रब्बा बैरी से बिछड़े
जाने किसने बनाए
हाय रे, हाय रे, हाय रे
दूरी तड़पाये
मेरे बाद चाहे आए याद मेरी
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो…अश्क़ ना हो हो
हो हो…

ओ लिखी खत में मैंने तुझे बात जो
सोना रख के तकिये तले रात को
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
ये जुदाई भी है दस्तूर
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो

नैना लौटा आने वाले साल जो
मेरी वर्दी बोले मेरा हाल तो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
ये समझना, मैं हूँ मजबूर
नैना अश्क़ ना हो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो  

Poem: The Soldier 

The Soldier BY RUPERT BROOKE 

If I should die, think only this of me:
      That there’s some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England. There shall be
      In that rich earth a richer dust concealed;
A dust whom England bore, shaped, made aware,
      Gave, once, her flowers to love, her ways to roam;
A body of England’s, breathing English air,
      Washed by the rivers, blest by suns of home.

And think, this heart, all evil shed away,
      A pulse in the eternal mind, no less
            Gives somewhere back the thoughts by England given;
Her sights and sounds; dreams happy as her day;
      And laughter, learnt of friends; and gentleness,
            In hearts at peace, under an English heaven. 

Comparison: 

The Soldier poem and  नैना अश्क़ ना हो song both are similar in one thing it's a soldier love for his nation and this song also suggest that how soldier going from his house to and die for his motherland.  

If I should die, think only this of me:
      That there’s some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England. 

नैना लौटा आने वाले साल जो
मेरी वर्दी बोले मेरा हाल तो
नैना अश्क़ ना हो 

If I die in the war, I want to be remembered in a particular way. Think of how the far-off land on which I die will have a small piece of England forever. That earth will be enriched by my dead body, because my body is made from dirt born in England. And the this song and this line say same thing that is how soldier think of his motherland first then his family and other things.so that way this poem and song are similar. This all things say that how soldier love his motherland. According to me this both Poems are similar in much things. 

 This is whole information about the what is war poetry.

Thank you

Thursday, March 3, 2022

Thinking Activity

 Thinking Activity: Bob Dylan and Robert Frost

This Blog is a response of thinking activity on Bob Dylan and Robert Frost, given by our professor Vaidehi Ma'am. Here i am sharing one video which was made by me by merging 5-6 small videos.And also going to write that, Which Poem or Song of Bob Dylan/Robert Frost is relatable with my Video. Why?  

🔅Bob Dylan


Bob Dylan, original name Robert Allen Zimmerman, (born May 24, 1941, Duluth, Minnesota, U.S.), American folksinger who moved from folk to rock music in the 1960s, infusing the lyrics of rock and roll, theretofore concerned mostly with boy-girl romantic innuendo, with the intellectualism of classic literature and poetry. Hailed as the Shakespeare of his generation, Dylan sold tens of millions of albums, wrote more than 500 songs recorded by more than 2,000 artists, performed all over the world, and set the standard for lyric writing. he legally changed his name to Robert Dylan in 1962 reportedly in homage to the poet Dylan Thomas. He is widely recognized as one of the greatest songwriters of the 20th century. Dylan was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2016.

Bob Dylan was inducted into the Songwriters Hall of Fame in 1982 and the Rock and Roll Hall of Fame in 1988. His albums Highway 61 Revisited and Blonde on Blonde, as well as the individual songs “Mr. Tambourine Man,” “Like a Rolling Stone,” and “Blowin’ in the Wind,” are in the Grammy Hall of Fame. In 2008 he was awarded a Pulitzer Prize Special Citation for his “profound impact on popular music and American culture, marked by lyrical composition of extraordinary poetic power.”

🔅Robert Frost 

  Robert Lee Frost (March 26, 1874 – January 29, 1963) was an American poet. His work was initially published in England before it was published in the United States. Known for his realistic depictions of rural life and his command of American colloquial speech, Frost frequently wrote about settings from rural life in New England in the early 20th century, using them to examine complex social and philosophical themes.Frequently honored during his lifetime, Frost is the only poet to receive four Pulitzer Prizes for Poetry. He became one of America's rare "public literary figures, almost an artistic institution".He was awarded the Congressional Gold Medal in 1960 for his poetic works. On July 22, 1961, Frost was named poet laureate of Vermont.

Among Frost's popular shorter poems are Mending Wall, Directive, Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, The Road Not Taken, Nothing Gold Can Stay, Fire and Ice, Birches, After Apple Picking. Robert Frost won the Pulitzer Prize at 4 different times. This is an achievement unequaled by any other American poet. Robert Frost finally died in Boston on January 29th, 1963. 

Thinking Task- 

Merge the five chosen shots and upload the video on your YouTube channel with any background music you like. 




The lyrics of my music is, 

Lyrics: 

Chhote Chhote Tamashe lyrics in Hindi from movie Sanam Re (2016) sung by Shaan. The song is written by Manoj Muntashir and music composed by Jeet Ganguli. Starring Pulkit Samrat, Yami Gautam. Music label T-Series.

छोटे छोटे तमाशे
जैसे पानी बताशे
होठों से ना जाने दे

हौले हौले झरोखे चल खोले ख़ुशी के
थोड़ी हवा तो आने दे
दबे दबे पाँव ज़रा चले आओ
ये पल मिलेंगे कहाँ

ये ज़िन्दगी है और क्या
इक चुटकुला हंसदे ज़रा
ख़फ़ा ख़फ़ा क्यों है तू

छोटे छोटे तमाशे
जैसे पानी बताशे
हाथों से ना जाने दे

हौले हौले झरोखे चल खोले ख़ुशी के
थोड़ी हवा तो आने दे

थोड़ी थोड़ी जोरा जोरी
थोड़ी थोड़ी चोरी शोरी करलें
भोली भाली प्यारी प्यारी
यादें सारी झोली में आ भरलें
थोड़ी थोड़ी जोरा जोरी
थोड़ी थोड़ी चोरी शोरी करलें
भोली भाली प्यारी प्यारी
यादें सारी झोली में आ भरलें

ये ज़िन्दगी है और क्या
इक चुटकुला हंसदे ज़रा
ख़फ़ा ख़फ़ा क्यों है तू

छोटे छोटे तमाशे
जैसे पानी बताशे
होठों से ना जाने दे

हौले हौले झरोखे चल खोले ख़ुशी के
थोड़ी हवा तो आने दे

खट्टे मीठे आमों जैसे
पेड़ों से आ लम्हें सारे तोड़ें
रेशा रेशा धागा धागा
दिलों की ये मोटी माला जोड़ें
खट्टे मीठे आमों जैसे
पेड़ों से आ लम्हें सारे तोड़ें
रेशा रेशा धागा धागा
दिलों की ये मोटी माला जोड़ें 

ये ज़िन्दगी है और क्या
इक चुटकुला हंसदे ज़रा
ख़फ़ा ख़फ़ा क्यों है तू

छोटे छोटे तमाशे
जैसे पानी बताशे
होठों से ना जाने दे

हौले हौले झरोखे चल खोले ख़ुशी के
थोड़ी हवा तो आने दे 

Answer these two questions.

1.)Write down the message you want to give from your lyrics. 

Ans, I give a message from the my video that is, enjoy your life whatever happens just forget about it and just enjoy like this birds. 

Song started a beautiful morning of the day. Sun shining like all the days that song line give message that, every day morning has started like a sun shining and every human being morning started with a new hope. 

Song start with first line छोटे छोटे तमाशे जैसे पानी बताशे. This line give message that water flow are naturally should have possible people also behave like this.
 
Then third video we can seem four birds is seating on electric cable and enjoy his time together that he gave message that is enjoy your life together because this present time people not connected and that's why he gave message that always spent time on together without any reasons. 
 
then forth video one bird swim in water and enjoy alone some time then he eat his food in the water and then we see that many birds come with together and swims like a participate on race. 

Last ending my video is evening time and those suggest peaceful day are end and next day new hope come with new adventure.

   So, here i completed my activity with my opinion and I gives message to everyone enjoy your Life freely. I end with this note. 

2.) Which Poem/Song of Bob Dylan/Robert Frost is relatable with your Video. Why?

Ans, The poem Fire and Ice by Robert Frost is relatable to my video.  

     Fire and Ice

                                  BY ROBERT FROST

Some say the world will end in fire,
Some say in ice.
From what I’ve tasted of desire
I hold with those who favor fire.
But if it had to perish twice,
I think I know enough of hate
To say that for destruction ice
Is also great
And would suffice. 

This poem related to my videos lyric because this fire and ice poem give a message is don't ma angry anything and don't spoil your life in some small thing because one day world end in fire and that means one day people also death' and that time his world end. I gave message that is  don't spoil your life forgot any thing and spend time togethers. My videos give message that is enjoy life like this birds and that time you think that. which way you living your life so you can  use example of fire and ice. So this is my experience of looking natural elements in life.


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Sunday, February 20, 2022

 Thinking Activity: I.A. Richards: Verbal Analysis of poem or song or flim song lyric or hymn or devotional song.  

This Blog is response of  thinking Activity given by Professor Dr. dilip Barad sir, Here i discuss about Verbal Analysis of poem or song or flim song or devotional songs. and also my view in  Indian poetics  is based on 7 days session by Professor vinod Joshi.
   


I.A.Richards, born in 1893, is one of the greatest critics of the modern age, and has influenced a number of critics on both sides of the Atlantic. He and T.S.Eliot are pioneers in the fields of New Criticism, though they differ from each other in certain important respects. Richards is a unique figure in English literary criticism because of the originality of his ideas. Moreover, like Coleridge, Richards was also interested in philosophy. His works in literary criticism helped to lay the practical foundations and methodology of New Criticism. 

His work

  • The Meaning of Meaning – 1923
  • The Principles of Literary Criticism – 1924
  •  The Practical Criticism – 1929. 

For kinds of Meaning

He believed that poet writes to communicate, and language is the means of that communication. Language is made of words, and hence a study of words is all important if we are to understand the meaning of a work of art. This four kinds meaning is given below.

  • Sense 
  • Feeling 
  • Tone 
  • Intention 

 To him, language of poetry is purely emotive, in its original primitive state. This language affects feelings.In his methodology, a lot of importance is given to the “words”. 

In Gujarati there is three kind of meaning

  •   અભિધા: Direct Meaning. 
  • વ્યંજના: There is direct meaning but it's not usable.
  • લક્ષણા: There is no direct meaning
Four types of misunderstanding:

 1. Misunderstanding of the sense of poetry: Careless, intuitive reading (rhyme or irregular syntax)

2. Over-literal reading – prosaic reading

3. Defective scholarship 

 4. Difference in meaning of words in poetry and prose 

So let's analyse some of poem or flim song on the basis of the I A Richard theory of figurative language and Indian poetic. 

Poem Analysis: 

Lyrics Title: Behti Hawa Sa Tha Woh
Movie: 3 Idiots
Singers: Shaan, Shantanu Moitra
Lyrics: Swanand Kirkire
Music: Shantanu Moitra
Music Company: T-Series. 


बहती हवा सा था वो
उड़ती पतंग सा था वो
कहाँ गया.. उसे ढूँढो 

बहती हवा सा था वो
उड़ती पतंग सा था वो
कहाँ गया.. उसे ढूँढो

हम को तो राहें थी चलती
वो खुद अपनी राह बनता,
गिरता संभालता
मस्ती में चलता था वो

हमको कल की फिकर सताती,
वो बस आज का जश्न मनाता,
हर लम्हें को खुल के जीता था वो
कहाँ से आया था वो..
छू के हमारे दिल को 
कहाँ गया.. उसे ढूँढो....

सुलगती धुप में छाओं के जैसा,
रेगिस्तान में गाँव के जैसा,
मन के घाव पे मरहम जैसा था वो
हम सहमें से रहते कूएं में,
वो नदिया में गोते लगता,
उलटी धरा चीर के तैरता था वो
बादल आवारा था वो..
यार हमारा था वो.. 
 कहाँ गया.. उसे ढूँढो...

हम को तो राहें थी चलती
वो खुद अपनी राह बनता,
गिरता संभालता
मस्ती में चलता था वो

हमको कल की फिकर सताती,
वो बस आज का जश्न मनाता,
हर लम्हें को खुल के जीता था वो
कहाँ से आया था वो..
छू के हमारे दिल को 
कहाँ गया.. उसे ढूँढो....

Scientific Reading - Misunderstanding of poetry  

When we do over literal reading, one may find it problematic to understand this poem because of the metaphors and similes it uses. For example song time and again refers to Hero as like moving air, flying kite, village in desert etc. One may question that how can a real person be like all this things ?

But this is overlitetal reading, scientific reading. But in literature, one has to understand the importance of metaphorical language. It is the metaphorical language through which we have to read this poem. This is the core ides discussed by I.A.Richard in the present article.this line is example of લક્ષણા. લક્ષણા means There is no direct meaning. Here, first  line  बेहती हवा सा था वो। उडती पतंग सा वो। those line say a direct meaning of  the words. 

Indian poetics:

અભિધા: Direct Meaning. 

हमको कल की फिकर सताती,
वो बस आज का जश्न मनाता,
हर लम्हें को खुल के जीता था वो 

This line say a direct meaning of abhidha  we all are worried about future life but the poet say that life is enjoy in present time.  So this is example of abhidha because this lines gives direct meaning of words. 

વ્યંજના: There is direct meaning but it's not usable.   

सुलगती धुप में छाओं के जैसा,
रेगिस्तान में गाँव के जैसा,
मन के घाव पे मरहम जैसा था वो
हम सहमें से रहते कूएं में,
वो नदिया में गोते लगता,
उलटी धरा चीर के तैरता था वो 

This line say a direct meaning of the words and also this all are the line problematic because सुलगती धुप में छाओं के‌ जैसा, रेगिस्तान में गांव के जैसा। How that's things possible because सुलगती धुप it's means hot weather and sun shining so that time छाओं means cold one time both weather not come together. 

લક્ષણા: There is no direct meaning. 

बहती हवा सा था वो
उड़ती पतंग सा था वो 

बहती हवा सा था वो, This lines say a indirect meaning because here poet use this word in metaphors it's means poet use not a direct meaning but indirect. and same thing use also next line. Because  बहती हवा it's means moving air, उड़ती पतंग it's means flying like kite in sky so person not as a part of naturel things and this all are not anyway possible. It is a best example of લક્ષણા. 

This all things are suggeste that how we all readers change poet thought and his real meaning . And that's why this all misunderstanding are happening to understand this song and his meaning. And this way Indian poetics also help us. And this way Indian poetics also help us to understand I. A. Richards Verbal Analysis.

Tuesday, February 1, 2022

Thinking Activity

Criticism: I A Richard "Practical Criticism" - Reading Poems 

This Blog task is the response of Reading selective poem and analyze from the reference of I.A.Richards's 'Practical Criticism' given by Prof.Dr.Dilip Barad Sir.Here I Sher my opinion on criticism and also Sher critical view of the poem Nazm: Ye Khel kya hai.

Practical criticism is, like the formal study of English literature itself, a relatively young discipline. It began in the 1920s with a series of experiments by the Cambridge critic I.A. Richards. He gave poems to students without any information about who wrote them or when they were written. In Practical Criticism of 1929 he reported on and analysed the results of his experiments. The objective of his work was to encourage students to concentrate on 'the words on the page', rather than relying on preconceived or received beliefs about a text. For Richards this form of close analysis of anonymous poems was ultimately intended to have psychological benefits for the students: by responding to all the currents of emotion and meaning in the poems and passages of prose which they read the students were to achieve what Richards called an 'organised response'. This meant that they would clarify the various currents of thought in the poem and achieve a corresponding clarification of their own emotions.

I.A. Richards notes that language of poetry is Figurative/ metaphorical/ symbolical and personified one. Language of poetry is connotative , not denotative. Meaning lies in the context. So while reading the poetry reader should be aware about this things otherwise there is possibility of Over- literal/ scientific reading, which may lead the reader to the totally different meaning than the intended one of the poem. 

 He believed that poet writes to communicate, and language is the means of that communication. Language is made of words, and hence a study of words is all important if we are to understand the meaning of a work of art. Words carry four kinds of meaning: Sense, Feelings, Tone and Intentions. Here, I discuss  my reading view of the poem Nazm- Ye Khel kya hai.

Analysis of poem: Nazm - Ye khel kya hai ( ये खेल क्या है ) by Javed akhtar

This nazm by Javed Akhtar (from his book of poems ‘Lava’) captures the notion of existential angst through the metaphor of a game of chess. He questions the contradictions of life, of social oppression and injustice through his thoughts about the rules of chess.

Nazm - Ye khel kya hai  
    ( नज़्म - ये खेल क्या है )

ये खेल क्या है
मिरे मुखालिफ़ ने चाल चल दी है 
और अब
मेरी चाल के इंतेज़ार में है
मगर मैं कब से
सफ़ेद खानों
सियाह खानों में रक्खे
काले-सफ़ेद मोहरों को देखता हूँ
मैं सोचता हूँ
ये मोहरे क्या हैं
अगर मैं समझूँ
कि ये जो मोहरे हैं
सिर्फ लकड़ी के हैं खिलौने
तो जीतना क्या है हारना क्या
न ये ज़रूरी
न वो अहम है
अगर खुशी है न जीतने की
न हारने का ही कोई ग़म है
तो खेल क्या है
मैं सोचता हूँ
जो खेलना है
तो अपने दिल में यक़ीन कर लूँ
ये मोहरे सचमुच के बादशाहो-वज़ीर
सचमुच के हैं प्यादे
और इनके आगे है
दुश्मनों की वो फ़ौज
रखती है जो कि मुझको तबाह करने के
सारे मनसूबे
सब इरादे
मगर मैं ऐसा जो मान भी लूँ
तो सोचता हूँ
ये खेल कब है
ये जंग है जिसको जीतना है
ये जंग है जिसमें सब है जायज़
कोई ये कहता है जैसे मुझसे
ये जंग भी है
ये खेल भी है
ये जंग है पर खिलाड़ियों की
ये खेल है जंग की तरह का
मैं सोचता हूँ
जो खेल है
इसमें इस तरह का उसूल क्यों है
कि कोई मोहरा रहे कि जाए
मगर जो है बादशाह
उसपर कभी कोई आँच भी न आए
वज़ीर ही को है बस इजाज़त
कि जिस तरफ़ भी वो चाहे जाए
मैं सोचता हूँ
जो खेल है
इसमें इस तरह का उसूल क्यों है
प्यादा जो अपने घर से निकले
पलट के वापस न जाने पाए
मैं सोचता हूँ
अगर यही है उसूल
तो फिर उसूल क्या है
अगर यही है ये खेल
तो फिर ये खेल क्या है
मैं इन सवालों से जाने कब से उलझ रहा हूँ
मिरे मुखालिफ़ ने चाल चल दी है
और अब मेरी चाल के इंतेज़ार में है।
 
                

Thinking Activity

Thinking Activity: Understanding the Zeitgeist of the 20th century: from Modern Times to the era of Great Dictator

 This blog i have written in a response of Thinking Activity. In this blog i am going to discuss about the important frames in Charles Chaplin's "Modern Times" and "The Great Dictator" 

"Modern Times"

Modern Times” is a silent black and white film, performed and directed by Charles Chaplin in 1936. The film is of both slapstick and satire, and is a socio-economic commentary on American society during the thirties, a period of rapid industrialization and the onset of the Great Depression. In the film, he plays a character known as the Tramp: a happy-go-lucky underdog, who does not quite understand society, and yet remains both cheerful and hopeful despite facing innumerable difficulty. In Modern Times, he portrays the reign of technology and society where humanity is forced to adjust to the machines and institutions of modern society, particularly with advent of the  Dream’ and the ‘pursuit of happiness’.

1931 Charles Chaplin told a newspaper interviewer :

“Unemployment is the vital question . . . Machinery should benefit mankind. It should not spell tragedy and throw it out of work.”

Chaplin, who was always very attentive to the economic and social problems of his day, declared in 1931: ‘unemployment, that’s the key question. Machines should do improve the well-being of humanity, instead of causing tragedy and unemployment”. 
 Ironically, the film opens with a cardboard on which is inscribed a bombastic sentence: “a story about the industry, individual initiative and the crusade of humanity in the pursuit of happiness”.

The significance of the first screen shows the time of 6 o'clock. And the time shows six o’clock is the time of leaving the factory/ industry.

Then the first frame of  sheep and second frames of fectory workers. Factories and mills were being equipped with new inventions of technology and machines were occupying the human jobs. Due to this unemployment, many people were roaming like sheep without direction.

Charlie is a factory worker in this hectic age. His job -mechanically tightening bolts on a moving belt. He crazy for his work.

This scene suggest that mind and money power is greater than muscles power.and that is best example of upper class fectory workers.

In his office, the President is shown a new aid to productivity - a method to shorten the lunch hour break and improve worker productivity. The sales pitch for a feeding machine is delivered by a mechanical salesman on a phonograph record:

a practical device which automatically feeds your men while at work. Don't stop for lunch. Be ahead of your competitor. The Billows feeding machine will eliminate the lunch hour, increase your production, and decrease your overhead.

The device is a mechanical, automated, aerodynamically-styled, silent feeding machine which features a revolving table, an automaton soup plate, an automatic food pusher, a revolving low and high gear corncob feeder, and a hydro-compressed sterilized mouth wipe. 

This film has a scene that depict great differences between social classes. There's a moment of parallelism between reality and a dream. A moment in which Chaplin and his partner are happily lying on the grass, then they saw a typical modern married couple. The man leaving home and going to work, and the wife staying house. They first joke and parody the situation, but then they dream about it. They imagine them in a real house, with food, comfort and all facilities. 

Can you imagine us in a little home like that?” – Chapplin

Then they stop fantasizing and return to rude reality, they were homeless, without work, starving and alone.

this scene we see that Trump read newspaper that is news for fectory reopen and he thinks that new hope come his life and his dream come true.

After becoming free from jail a sheriff writes a recommendation letter, and on the basis of that letter he get a job at departmental store as a timekeeper. People are easily trust the letter. But present time people not easyly trust that type of letter and not give any job for workers. 

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